The Pirate Adventure

This week in class for writing we had to pick a key and also pick what it opens. What I found hard was my planning because I didn't really know what to write about. What I found easy was writing the story out.Maybe next time I will try and make my story more interesting.  

The Pirate Adventure

Once upon a time, there was a pirate crew that went on a voyage to find the secret key of Atlantia. The reason why they went on the voyage to find the secret key was because there was also a secret treasure chest, and that key was what would open that treasure chest.
While they were on their voyage they came across some very rough seas. And they got taken off course, but then out of the blue Aquaman (The superhero who is part fish) arrived and decided to help the crew because they were looking very lost. So Aquaman asked “ Where are you all going ?” the crew said “ We are going to find the secret key of Atlantia that will open the treasure chest, could you please help us?”. Aquaman had a very long think about it then he finally made a decision and said “yes”, the crew all said “Hooray” because they were very happy that they had another member of the crew.
After days and days of looking for the secret key of Atlantia they all said “I give up” but the captain said “We can’t give up now we are so close to finding the key” “But we’ve searched the whole entire ocean” said the crew,then Aquaman said “GUYS look I found the key!” “What how? I thought you were standing here that whole entire time while we were arguing” “Well while you guys were arguing I thought that I’d do a quick scan of the area again before we move to the next location, and then I found it” “Well thank you Aquaman and now all we need to do is find the chest!” “Hooray” shouted the crew. Since they found the key they decided to have a little rest before they set off for another voyage to find the secret treasure chest of Atlantia.
Later on that day they set sail for the next location to find the chest. After hours and hours of looking for the chest they still found nothing, but then they saw something very shiny in the sea,they all looked down to see if they could get a closer look but the closer they got the further it went. Then Aquaman said “Let me go down and get it for you” but then the captain said “I am very sorry but no let us get this one, because I don’t want us to rely on you because we need to know how to do things ourselves but thank you for your offer and for helping us get the key” then Aquaman said “ No worries then I will be off to go and help others in need” “Thank you Aquaman” said the crew.
After saying goodbye to Aquaman the captain said “I am going to go and dive in and grab the chest” so the captain went and put his swimsuit on and dived into the ocean, as the captain dived in he saw the chest and he was so happy and he was filled with excitement. As he was going in to grab the chest he couldn’t even lift it, so he went back up to the boat and said “Boys it’s time to suit up” so they all but their swimsuits on and dived in too. When they all got to the chest they all had very big smiles on their faces, and altogether they lifted up the chest and altogether they brought the box to the ship and they all hopped into the ship and opened up the treasure chest and as they opened it they were all very happy and they split the treasure against them and they all lived happily ever after altogether.