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Tuesday, 4 July 2017

The legend of the girl that turned into a coconut tree.

The legend of the girl that turned into a coconut tree

Long ago in the nineteen hundreds there lived a young pacific girl. She was very kind,loving and helpful. Her name was Connie Coco for short because she liked coconuts.

One beautiful summer's day coco decided to go to the village and help out. While Coco was helping out she spotted an old,ill woman. Coco felt sorry for the old lady so she decided to go and help out the old,ill woman.

After Coco helped the old woman she spotted her friends. Coco walked up to her friends and asked them if “they wanted to hang out’ they all said “ yes”. So they went for a walk and chilled out in the blazing sun.

Week’s passed and Coco got sick.Then suddenly Coco stopped breathing then died. Coco’s family and friends didn’t know what to do. They all decided that since Coco liked coconuts they would bury her next to a lovely, tall, brown coconut tree.

Years passed and Coco turned into a lovely,tall,beautiful,brown coconut tree.


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  1. Anonymous27 July 2017 at 11:25

    Hi my name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School and I like this post because the story always sticks to the title. I like the way that you made it short but detailed. What made you think of think story?

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    1. Anonymous21 August 2017 at 12:45

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    2. Anonymous21 August 2017 at 12:48

      Well in class for writing we had to make up a story about legends so I decided to go with coconuts.
      From Atalina

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  2. Anonymous27 July 2017 at 11:33

    WOW! My name is Parwin and I think your story is double amazing! Where did you come up with the idea's and why? Maybe next time write some more because it was amazing!

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    1. Anonymous21 August 2017 at 12:51

      Well I came up with the ideas because we had to write a story in class about legends so I went with coconut's. I went with coconut's because my friend did mango's and I didn't know what to do so I did coconut's. I kinda took the idea from her but did coconut's instead.
      From Atalina

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  3. Anonymous21 August 2017 at 10:09

    Hi Atalina,I loved your story so much, its just like my story, maybe you can check mine out
    http://pwstkrystal.blogspot.co.nz/

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    1. Anonymous21 August 2017 at 12:53

      Hi Krystal.
      It's Atalina, I went to visit your blog but I didn't know what the story was called. could you please give me the name of your story. Thanks

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