The old cabin
As the man slithers his way down to the ground his eyes start to close. The sound of crunching leaves outside startles him. The man silently gets up to get a better view of what was outside. As the man was getting up he could hear footsteps from the other end of the cabin,getting closer and closer. The man stops and stands still for a moment, then the man heard a big “CRASH”
The man was shocked and didn’t know what to do. He walked around to the back of the cabin to find a big,hairy bear covered in red,liquid.The man didn’t know what to do so the man decided to rip a piece of his clothes off so he could wrap it around the bear,as the man got closer the bear started growling.As the man was gently patting the bear the bear felt safe the man gently wrapped the piece of clothing around the bear. They both laid there doing nothing until they hear the loud mysterious creaking coming from the other side. Who could it be?
Hi Atalina, I am Parwin from yaldhurst Model School. Your story was great and interesting, it was a scary story which was a great type of story. I think that next time you should make another story like this because this is amazing! I think that it might be a giant hairy monster behind the cabin but what do you think?
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Hi Parwin,
DeleteThank you for your lovely comment. I am really not sure what I think would be behind the cabin but I will keep thinking about that and about making another story too.
From Atalina
Hi im Base cool that its a scary story which was a great type of story. I think that next time you should make another story like this because this is amazing!
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