W.A.L.T. Use the correct structure for a recount. I really enjoyed writing about my school holidays. Maybe next time I could come up with more descriptive words.
My Holiday
On the first week of the school holidays, my aunty,uncle and cousin’s came over to my house to have a drink and talk about some stuff. While my parents,aunty,uncle and cousins were drinking, me,my two sisters and my cousin were watching movies and mucking around.
After one hour, my family came inside had something to eat then took off but left my cousin with me and my family because she wanted to spend some time with us.
Seeing my aunty,uncle and cousin’s made me feel happy and sad at the same time. I’m happy to see them because I haven’t seen them since last year and I’m sad because they will have to go home and I won’t see them in ages.
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