Goldilocks twisted

              Noodle Locks

One day,there was a very charming girl, her name was Noodella. She always stayed home and cleaned up after herself and her parents. She loved to explore and play with her horse, who had noodle hair like her, her horse was brown with golden hair and also looked very fair.

The next day, Noodella went exploring into the woods with her pet horse Dory,they went and wandered through the woods and came across a small cottage. They stopped and Noodella said “let's go in it’s not like the owners are home there's food inside and a place to sleep” Dory shook her head. Dory Dory stopped and started to run as she saw a gunman come, Noodella rushed inside and waited for Dory but Dory never came back.

A few days later Noodella realized that she ate all the food and that there was nothing to do, so she went upstairs and had a nap, but not realizing that people started coming inside.

                            To be continued...

This week in Room 6 we are writing our own twist about Goldilocks. Next time I could try think of better ways to write my story so it's more interesting.