W.A.L.T ... I am learning to solve multiplication problems using a variety of mental strategies. I really liked making this and it was really amazing. Maybe next time I could give more explanation.
Wednesday, 28 June 2017
Tuesday, 20 June 2017
The old cabin
W.A.L.T. Show not tell. For the past two weeks we have been learning show not tell. I really enjoyed this writing activity because it was very enjoyable and fun. Something I need to work on is my punctuation and my grammar.
The old cabin
The old cabin
As the man slithers his way down to the ground his eyes start to close. The sound of crunching leaves outside startles him. The man silently gets up to get a better view of what was outside. As the man was getting up he could hear footsteps from the other end of the cabin,getting closer and closer. The man stops and stands still for a moment, then the man heard a big “CRASH”
The man was shocked and didn’t know what to do. He walked around to the back of the cabin to find a big,hairy bear covered in red,liquid.The man didn’t know what to do so the man decided to rip a piece of his clothes off so he could wrap it around the bear,as the man got closer the bear started growling.As the man was gently patting the bear the bear felt safe the man gently wrapped the piece of clothing around the bear. They both laid there doing nothing until they hear the loud mysterious creaking coming from the other side. Who could it be?
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